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Attractions of Hyderabad


Feature by: Fatima Mustafa


Love of homeland is a natural thing. If we love our country we should  also love our city. All the cities of Pakistan are beautiful and have their own identity. Likewise Hyderabad is the city of Sindh Province  , it has its own identity and history behind the name. Before the creation of Pakistan it was called as "Paris of India". Mian Ghulam Shah Kalhoro founded Pakistan in 1768 . Its old name was Neroon Kot. Later Kalhoro family changed the name  as "Hyderabad" on the name of Hazrat Ali (R.A). Hyderabad city is built on three Hillocks over each other. The city is multi Ethnic and has mix of languages like Sindhi, Urdu speaking Muhajir , Pashtun , Punjabi, Balochi etc.
Muhajir live mostly in Latifabad and mostly  Sindhi lives in Qasimabad.

Hyderabad is important commercially because of its industrial products like textile, cement, sugar etc.
Handicrafts is also famous in Hyderabad city . Hyderabad is also famous for the production of glass bangles which export all our the country , which are cheap in price. Hyderabad is famous for agriculture including Rice, Millets, Jute etc.

HYDERABAD OLD ATTRACTION :

The old attraction of Hyderabad are old places like Pakko Killo which is known as Hyderabad Fort and other Kacha Kila which is called as Weak Fort , Tombs of Talpur (Cubbas) Hirabad,  Rani Bagh Old Zoo was named because of Queen of Victoria England , Hussainabad Park, Goll Building in town which is exactly Circular, Thandi Sarak which  is said that here wind pressure is high. There is an also old museum named as Sindh Meseum with old and tradational Civilization,  Resham Gali which is also known as oldest Bazar of Hyderabad , Tower market which is used as shopping for local peoples , Cloth Market where used clothes are sales , Chotki Ghitti these all are said to be old attractions . There is also a stadium for cricket and hockey  known as Niaz Stadium, and Hockey Stadium.

Hyderabad is booming fast like all other cities of Pakistan. Hyderabad has hot and humid climate and cools and breezy nights . Nowdays City is going through great moderization programs. New flyovers , pedistrain, bridges , new bus triminals , shopping malls , five star hotels like  Royal Taj , Lalqilla, DeGravity,Lamoosh ,Rooftop ,BBQ Tonight , Bombay  Bakery and Fast and Italian restaurants like Mirchi 360, Subway, Pizza Hut, Pizza Track , Snoopy , Garrison , all are now called modern attractions of Hyderabad because  you can see lot of croud over these places daily. People use to go and buy many households items easily from new Malls like Max Bachat, Dawood Mall, Baig Mart etc.  All major foreign banks and foreign fast food chain restaurants and all the brands of shopping have opened up their branches in Hyderabad due to increased industrial, economic, and commercial activity in the city. Hyderabad is a peaceful town where people are generous, where it is must to spend a portion of the day with friends and where the evening are cool throughout the year.

Roll No: 2k14-MC-27

BS: PART 3

Submitted to: Sir Sohail Sangi

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Attractions of Hyderabad
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Feature by: Fatima Mustafa
Roll No: 2k14-MC-27
BS: PART 3
Date:19-1-2016



Love of homeland is a natural thing. If we love our country we should  also love our city. All the cities of Pakistan are beautiful and have their own identity. Likewise Hyderabad is the city of Sindh Province  , it has its own identity and history behind the name. Before the creation of Pakistan it was called as "Paris of India". Mian Ghulam Kalhoro founded Pakistan in 1768 . Its old name was Neroon Kot. Later Kalhoro family changed the name  as "Hyderabad" on the name of Hazrat Ali (R.A). Hyderabad city is built on three Hillocks over eachother. The city is multi Ethnic and has mix of languages like Sindhi, Urdu speaking Muhajir , Pashtun , Punjabi, Balochi etc.
Muhajir live mostly in Latifabad and mostly  Sindhi lives in Qasimabad.

Hyderabad is important commercially because of its industrial products like textile, cement, sugar etc.
Handicrafts is also famous in Hyderabad city . Hyderabad is also famous for the production of glass bangles which export all our the country , which are cheap in price. Hyderabad is also famous for agriculture including Rice, Millets, Jute etc.

HYDERABAD OLD ATTRACTION :

The old attraction of Hyderabad are old places like PAKKO KILLO which is known as HYDERABAD FORT and other KACHA KILA which is called as WEAK FORT, TOMBS OF TALPUR (CUBBAS) HIRABBAD, RANI BAGH OLD ZOO was named because of Queen of Victoria England , Hussainabad Park, Goll Building in town which is exactly Circular, THANDHI SARAK which  is said that where  wind pressure is high. There is also old museum named as Sindh Meseum with old and tradational Civilization,  Resham Gali which is also known as oldest Bazar of Hyderabad , Tower market , Cloth Market , Chotki Ghitti these all are said to be old attractions . There is also a stadium for cricket and hockey  known as Niaz Stadium, and Hockey Stadium.

Hyderabad is booming fast like all other cities of Pakistan. Hyderabad has hot and humid climate and cools and breezy nights . Nowdays City is going through great moderization programs. New flyovers , pedistrain, bridges , new bus triminals , shopping malls , five star hotels like  ROYAL TAJ, LALQILLA, DEGRAVITY ,LAMOSH ,ROOFTOP ,BBQ TONIGHT, BOMBAY BAKERY, and FAST and ITALIAN restaurants like MIRCHI 360, SUBWAY, PIZZA HUT , PIZZA TRACK, SNOOPY , GARRISON, all are now called modern attractions of Hyderabad because  you can see lot of croud over these places daily. People use to go and buy many households items easily from new Malls like MAXBACHAT, DAWOOD MALL, BAIG MART etc.  All major foreign banks and foreign fast food chain restaurants and all the brands of shopping have opened up their branches in Hyderabad due to increased industrial, economic, and commercial activity in the city.
In my point of view Hyderabad need to  be develop further as like other well developed cities where tourist come and use to enjoy.


Submitted to: Sir Sohail Sangi